Written in the Sky Reviews

Easy 100% game plus girl love. 10/10

This was a ok story i loved how it was a wonderful lesbian love story

P l a y e d i t f o r t h e p l o t

If you want one well-written sex scene, no choices and like three nude images of anime lesbians, this is the "game". That's all it has to offer. Maybe, but not on Steam.

Pros: Cute art. Completely ridiculous. Cons: Super Short. Might be a little too ridiculous for some [I’m strange though]. Was it worth the 30 minutes invested and the free price tag? Definitely.

Absolutely terrifyingly awful. The story is poorly written, and serves as little more than a Loli fan-fic. I shudder to think that there were almost certainly drafts that were nauseatingly more sexually explicit. Played this on "under 18" mode so I spared myself the shame of whatever nudity the game presents along with its "barely better than porn" script. [Played as part of my Visual Novel experience]

Pros: - It's free. - It's very short. Worst case scenario you'll waste half an hour reading. - Graphic is alright. Nothing to write home about but for a free game it's good enough. - While the story is by far not a good one, turns out to be slightly less stupid than I expected. Cons: - No Gameplay at all. No choices, no minigames, no unlocks, nothing. Just hold down space and you'll get 100%. Overall this game has a huge con (no gameplay? shouldn't even be classified as a game!) and a few minor pros (being free is the only noteworthy one, the others don't really matter much). In the end I gave it a Recommend as it's free and won't steal much time from you, but do consider that it's not a game at all.

This is a very short story about 2 girls who begin lesbian relationship, and that´s the most i got from it since tough the sex scenes are very well written for the ones who like this kind of write, the rest of the story is confusing and at some point hilariously bad to be taken serious. It still interesting to see such subject at your disposal here on steam, and since its free, i recommend you have look specially if you like well written sex scenes, that its this game strong point and only take 1h of your time.

How to play this game: 1. Press start 2. Press skip 3. watch some lesbian porn 4.get two achievements. GOTY 9/11

[h1]Written in the Sky - a Sophisticated Review[/h1] [strike]This game is utter crap.[/strike] Oh pardon me, did I just say game? It's a poor excuse for a visual novel. This visual novel is utter crap. Hmmmm... It is visual. But a novel? Nah. The "story" is too superficial and the characters are barely even existing as such. You "play" as Azure, a japanese (at least I assume so) schoolgirl that looks like 10 albeit actually being 18 (what a coincidence). She is bored, her life is crap. Typical teenager stuff. But also she is borderline stupid and has a rather interesting relationship with her father, who she kind of loves (her mom is dead boohoo) but also kind of despises (he gets "angry" for her bailing on school). She isn't even sure herself. But meh, life goes on and so she decides to sneak out. Though various mischiefs caused by her sheer stupidity she gets to meet a girl from another planet: the Queen of Mars. Another borderline stupid character that constantly changes her motivation and presents a poorly written plot about some war on Mars. Skip. And then finally, after about 20 minutes of stupid, poorly written "dialogues" and "characters" and lots of tootling "music", you get to why you downloaded this "game" ahem "visual novel" (IT'S FREE!!!!(thank god)) : the obligatory yuri sex scene. It's OK actually, compared to the rest of this "beautiful experience". But if you're a fan of yuri stuff- and I mean REAL yuri stuff- then it's also garbage. It feels like something written by a porn-addicted 15-year-old who you imagine gulping down his saliva every now and then whilst figuring out the words to write. If you decided to make your own "visual novel" it would probably come out more than just better written. You'll enjoy it more and you would have accomplished something instead of just having wasted your time. Don't get me wrong, the two girls in Written In The Sky are rather attractive and some of the backgrounds look decent but this changes nothing. Written in the Sky is not a game. It is not a visual novel. There is no interactivity whatsoever. Most of the backgrounds look like crap, the music is irritating to say the least, the big pink text box covers up the t***ies and the writing is beyond awful. But you get to "play" for only half an hour to get the two achievements. That's cool. So what is Written in the Sky exactly? Ehm... Visual.... Pulp.... fan-fiction-like? This really is a tough question. It'd be best if you see for yourself. It barely even lasts for half an hour. But half an hour actually is a long time you could spend doing something else. In fact I procrastinated on studying in order to "play" this. 2/10 because I like yuri lol and also the trailer is really funny - probz to those who made it [h1]WARNING: DO NOT TRY THIS AT HOME[/h1]