HANA : Hide and seek Bewertungen

It is a bit short but I definitly recommend it for its storyline and interpretations.

I was fairly excited for this seeing the beautiful art on tiktok. Reminder so far there are only 2 parts out, and more content will be added! Positive points: -amazing artstyle -nice horror elements -puzzles not too hard and horror RPG style -little minigame inside was rly fun and a sweet addition -cool character designs For the parts I played so far, critique wise (soft spoilers inbound): There are some grammatical errors that kinda took me out of it a bit. Or just typing mistakes really. Easily fixable, just have someone proofread before releasing the entire chapter, or testplay! I know there is only one person working on this, and often mistakes like this are easily missed if no one else reads over them. I didn't like the use of asteriks in the game as it is a little bit too much chat speech and not rly fit to keep in a horror game, unless it was a conscious stylistic choice, maybe lay off it and try going for actual written out sounds or narrator comments blended into the dialogue. Reading *opens mouth* just is kinda weird in a game. While I did enjoy the little "fighting sequence" I think it was a little rushed/out of nowhere. As I don't know if this is part of the characters imagination or an actual event, idk how to feel about it yet. The sequence itself was very creative and nice though as a gameplay element, just maybe a lil harsh.