The Line Reviews

There are a lot of bugs in this game. The puzzles aren't hard but they are kind of dull.

I really want to give this a thumbs up because the environments are so detailed, lush, and gorgeous... but I can't. Two out of the four puzzles are just horrendous, and the final puzzle is intentionally misleading. This results in a huge amount of time being wasted on what should be a simple enough puzzle.

Well, I like to give some indie studio a chance but this one... The graphic settings should have more, the brightness in my game is horrible. I played 30 minutes and I'm already bored. I know it's kind of a walking simulator but with bad graphic I don't feel like walking in there. Sergio diary is in spanish? How the saves work? I exit and when I got back I was at the start of chapter. I don't even understand how this game takes 16gb of space. I don't think steam should have put this game in is store page. As of right now this game is not worth my time. I don't like to give bad review but I paid for something that I don't enjoy.

I really liked this game. I didn't encounter any bugs. The graphics were nice. The music fit perfectly completing the atmosphere of a lonely situation. I liked the water and there was attention to detail like the mold on the walls and the curtains blowing from the breeze off the water. A couple of the puzzles were head scratchers lol which I liked, but most importantly, the story was interesting. I found myself scanning each area for the next flashing sheet of paper! Great job dev on your first game! I can't wait for your next one.

I couldn't find where the actual gameplay was... I explored for half an hour, read a bunch of letters, but couldn't find any way to make any progression. After scouring the map for anything I could have missed, I gave up and refunded it.

Unique story, albeit a short one. I cannot finish due to the bridge. Platforming is not my thing. I will only try so many times before giving it up. For the life of me, I can't figure out why devs are putting this crap in their puzzle games. That is not a puzzle. It was good while it lasted.

I bought this game simply because some of the reviewers here were busting the devs chops. It is a bit buggy at this point, but is promising. It's $1.99, as much as you'd spend for a cheap cup of coffee, and the visuals are good, so if it's this guy's first offering, let him fix it, and then if it still doesn't work, dump on him. Give the guy a chance, I want more games from guys like this. Stop being so impatient. It's a process, hence the $1.99 price tag.

Yes, the game is not perfect but I really liked the story. I kept me interested through out the whole game. This is your first game? That's awesome. I'm sure you'll keep getting better. Can't wait for your next game. Good job.

This game was interesting to say at the least. The story was intriguing and after the fourth chapter, I had a hunch of who was behind it. Thus, I was correct but I did not expect that ending. Kudos to the developer for this being the first game (and a team of one). If you like these type of games, it may be suitable for you. Giving this a recommendation because I can tell that the developer worked hard for this and you have my support! I hope to see in the future even more games from you. Pros: -Nice visuals and sounds -Movement was smooth -Third puzzle was by far the best one in the game that I enjoyed (implement that one in your future puzzle games!) Cons: -The last puzzle (maybe in the note, he could hint at time?) -No landing sound after jumping -No inventory system Work ons: -Try to implement an inventory system for collecting the notes (to negate the fact of writing important stuff down or running all the back to the note) -The last puzzle, it was more confusing than the others (I eventually got it, but I had to go to the discussion board to figure it out even though I did have a hunch of how to solve it.) -Update the story some, I want to know who we are and why we are there..like why do we start where we do? Why are there to begin with, are we from the Other Lines? I know in the description it lists that, but it should also be integrated into the beginning of the game (like you see yourself traveling to the start area, and cinematic text is displayed to tell you who you are and what your mission is.)

To be honest the game shouldn't have a price at all. It should be free, if anything. And here's why; [list] [*]The game plays so badly you'd think it's in alpha stage, I had to go back and check if it was in early development and I wasn't confusing it with another game... [*]You can literally write in the menu, like write your own text, it's bizzare, I've never seen that before in a game. It's not a feature, it's a bug. How can there be such obvious bugs at the start of a game already, surely you would have seen it to begin with and fixed it by the time you release it. [*]The game is full of invisible walls. [*]If you select resolution, in my case 1080p, it crashes. [*]The puzzles are really weird and don't really have any logic to them... [*]There's no motion blur or headbob controlls so you will get really sick. [*]I feel bad for saying it but it's so far really boring but I will try to finish it. [/list]