Rozalin and the Palace of Flowers Reviews

This was a great visual novel. The story-line was original and the graphics were amazing. The music was fitting to the scenes and the player had an opportunity to interact with the characters as the story developed. I personally enjoyed the art of this game as I found the characters to be well done. The story was interesting and unique too. There is no graphic sexual content but suggestive scenes are described.

Let me start off by saying that your artwork is freaking gorgeous. Now let me give you some criticism; 1. I think that characters could get some work (face or body gestures) Idle poses are 'fine' but they just give a lazy-uninspired vibe of a game overall. 2. The classroom background is bright, like [b]bright[/b]. It burned my eyes through all the game. 3. The CG Gallery is bugged, It just show 1 CG. And finally! 4. It would be nice to have an Spanish translation if you don't mind, it can be easier to get to more people. The story was nice, but I got the bad ending in my first playthrough and I really don't understand why, maybe I missed something along the lines but I don't know why she would do that. I need answeeers. And even when I get the 'good' ending the story ends so abruptly! For my review: I think this is a game from a starter-tier developer, don't expect a higly elaborate VN 'cause it's just not meant to be. It's a great soul-made work, a short cold and warming story for fxf-love seekers. Hopefully, I would like to see more of your works on Steam, dev. Thank you and good luck!

CONS/Overall: This game is not fit as a commercial product. The writing is absolutely awful and nonsensical. The editing is NON-EXISTENT. The writer couldn't even capitalize the "i" in "I'm." This game was clearly written by someone who doesn't have a complete understanding of English. There were occasional words still written in Spanish. I have honestly NEVER experienced such an awful mess of writing and grammar mistakes, and I have years of experience teaching English as a second language. The options menu is full of options that do nothing. They even left in options for characters who do not exist in the game -- specifically, they left in remnants of VN Maker defaults. There are other default VN Maker things left behind as well. PROs: The art is original art, including the 3 backgrounds. It's fun to laugh at how much of a failure this game is. More cons: The characters only have one expression. The sexual content is text only, no adult imagery whatsoever. The story is less than 2 hours long. (this could be a pro too) Bottom Line: If you would have at LEAST put forth the effort to have someone do a single pass of editing on the writing, I could have written this off as a genuine attempt, but this VN reeks of bare minimum effort. It's bad. Very, very, very bad.

[h1]At a Glance[/h1] [table] [tr] [td](Adult) Content[/td] [td](FxF) Sexual themes.[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td]Censorship?[/td] [td]Not applicable.[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td]Hours of Gameplay[/td] [td]Two or three hours.[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td]Modding Support?[/td] [td]No.[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td]Patch Available?[/td] [td]No, not necessary.[/td] [/tr] [/table] [b]Rozalin and the Palace of Flowers[/b] is a visual novel about a girl's quest to find a cure for a deadly curse. [h1]Gameplay[/h1] A basic visual novel with only two player choices; smash through text boxes until you reach an ending. [h1]Story[/h1] Rozalin has two weeks to live, or find a cure to her "Rose Curse". She and her friends Andrea and Anali are both interested in her companionship, but the three schoolgirls are more than what meets the eye. Adding the mystery, a boy in Rozalin's class has a message to deliver to her, but only after two weeks have passed. The four students are all connected in a plot involving [i]love[/i] and magic. [table][tr][td]To read the full length "Story", check this review out on Wombat Trap (dot-com).[/td][/tr][/table] [h1]Visuals[/h1] The titlescreen is promising. From "Settings", you may adjust a variety of audio, dialogue and display preferences. While there is a "Gallery", it appears to be dysfunctional; after completing the game and witnessing two CGs, the Gallery remained empty. The fourth text box in the game has a typo. How, how was this not caught during testing? Actually, there are quite a bit of typos in the dialogue. The letter "i" is regularly uncapitalized when it should be. The character Bastian is referred to as both a "he" and a "she". The writing overall felt unnatural, and I had a hard time understanding what everyone was saying. There are so many typos, I think it's unacceptable; someone should have proofread the game. [b]- The Goods-[/b] I didn't spot any sexual content in this game. There was kissing; but that's hardly saucy. [h1]Verdict[/h1] Given the flaws to this game, I recommend waiting for an update or two. The writing was difficult to comprehend, and I wasn't fond of the story's pacing. I think this is passionate, wholesome, story between three lady-lovers. However, this visual novel falls short of my expectations, but I think it's worth a read if (A) you can read past poor English and (B) you aren't looking for sexual content (as the Store Tags might lead you to believe). [table][tr][td][url=https://wombattrap.com/review/rozalin-and-the-palace-of-flowers/]To read the full length review, click here![/url][/td][/tr][/table] [h1]Support the Wombat[/h1] [b]<3[/b] Follow the [b]Wombat Trap Curator[/b] page for more reviews! [url=https://store.steampowered.com/curator/36272124-Wombat-Trap/]Click here![/url] [b]<3[/b] Join the [b]Wombat Trap Group[/b] to stay up to date on propaganda! [url=https://steamcommunity.com/groups/wombattrap]Click here![/url] [b]<3[/b] Sell your soul to me with [b]Patreon[/b] to keep me alive! [url=https://www.patreon.com/datwombat]Click here![/url]